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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Tim Hortans on Thu May 05, 2011 6:14 am

Expanding on pere's idea, maybe Cial went in and found some drunk in Yulgar's Inn and it sounded like a good idea at the time.

I also find Nuke's idea intriguing, but I don't really see how it would fit into any storyline. He went inactive anyways.
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Snukems on Thu May 05, 2011 6:42 pm

Tim, Ganon was banned, otherwise he'd be active...although, if he came back, I'd make him not troll TR. Although really, that was the point. He'd be new if he came back using his real internet name. Maybe we could make him the male player, and call the female "Sarah". Of course, however, I would try to make the player able to get a custom name.

I'll put a draft for the first mission in now, because I'm at school before it actually opens and can't go inside:

Starting scene:
Player walks into TR castle, reading out loud.
Player: HEY I HEARD YOU GUYS ARE ACCEPTING NEW MEMBERS AGAIN.
Player calls *Nuke on Skype.
Player: Hey man can you get someone to let the lifty bridge thing to come down so I can go over it?
Nuke: Yeah but only a PRINCE (Admin) can do that.
Nuke adds Shadow to the call.
Shadow: HOW DID YOU ADD ME I DON'T EVEN HAVE SKYPE?
Nuke: Using the power of lulz.
Shadow: I'm serious.
Nuke: I used your MSN address. I don't know how and I don't think I want to know how.
Shadow: Well then. Since you did the impossible, what is the reason for you calling me on Skype?
Nuke: There are three people in this call. Ganon there is a new recruit. Let him get in, please?
Shadow: Sure.
The bridge is now down.
Player: Thank you Mr. Shadow.
Shadow: k. Anything else, Nuke?
Nuke: Who'll show this guy around TR Castle?
Shadow: You decide. I'm leaving the call.
Nuke: Alright.
Shadow leaves. Nuke adds Rob.
Rob: What is it?
Nuke: Can you show [[Player]] TR Castle? As in a tutorial-ish thing.
Rob: Sure.
Nuke: Go to the front entrance. He'll be there.
Rob: Nothing better to do, I guess.
Player: Ok, Rob!

I'll work on the rest in a few minutes. Any thoughts?
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by DigDog on Thu May 05, 2011 6:45 pm

...maybe we should let someone else write the script.
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Snukems on Thu May 05, 2011 6:46 pm

Yep. I really was just writing that since I had about 40 minutes with nothing to do.
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by DigDog on Thu May 05, 2011 6:50 pm

Snukems wrote:40 minutes with nothing to do.
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Snukems on Thu May 05, 2011 7:00 pm

While at school, though.
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Mrsebi on Fri May 06, 2011 12:32 am

TR- The Game: Tutorial.

(Player wakes up on a beach)

Player: Ugh… where am I?

(player slowly gets up, instructions appear on how to move and interact with objects, and an arrow points to move to the left, eventually the player finds a path with a sign next to it, then collapses on the ground)

Player: Owwww...

(Game fades to black, and then reveals again to show the player in an infirmary, Security Guard 1 and 2 are in the room)

SG1: I think he is waking up!

SG2: Maybe you should poke him with a stick?

SG1: We don’t have sticks, just needles.

SG2: Fine, then poke him with a needle genius!

Player: I’m awake, I’m awake!

SG2: Are you sure? (To SG1) We should poke him just in case!

Player: Please don’t…. (Gets out of bed) where am I?

SG1: Ah yes… *ahem* welcome to TR island!

Player: Where?

SG2: TR Island, home to legendary Vamparagon and his loyal followers!

SG1: Well… loyal as long as he keeps paying us…

Player: I don’t think I have ever heard of this place?

SG1: That would probably be because two years ago one of our members had a bit of a hissy fit and torched the speedboat… (shakes head) Peregrine never recovered…

SG2: We have been isolated here since, at first everyone worked with each other… vaguely well, but things deteriorated pretty quickly.

Player: I see… so I’m in the building?

SG1: A building, at first there was the main complex right here in the middle of the island, as we fell apart though, members split off and built their own housing: now this place is littered with small constructions and underground complexes! You’d think we would build boats but…

SG2: But enough about us, tell us about you: what’s your name, how did you get here?

Player: My name is *name* and I was…

(Suddenly there is a loud explosion)

SG1: We’re under attack!

SG2: All men to battle-stations! Those who flee will die!

Player: Um… there’s just the three of us?

SG1: Don’t be a smart ass… come on!

(Player, Security Guard 1 and 2 go to a different room, there is a hole in the wall and standing in front of it is a mysterious girl and two female shaped robots)

??? Girl: At last! A new place for the female forces to conquer! Squeeeee!

SG1: Not so fast Katherine!

Katherine: Ewwwww… guys! You die now! Fembots, attack!

(The robots hit and wound SG1 and SG2)

SG1&SG2: Owwww…

(If player is male)

Katherine: You go smoosh too!

(if player is female)

Katherine: Oooo… a new girl! Wanna join us?

Player: You just killed Security guard one and two!

SG1: How the heck do you even know our names?

(Regardless of player gender, a battle starts: the player is fighting a Fembots, during the battle SG1&SG2 will explain to the player the controls, the player wins and the robots are smashed)

Katherine: Noooooooo, The fembots! Altera worked so hard on those…

Player: You are next!

(If player is male)

Katherine: As much as I would like to flay the skin from your flesh, I have to go…

(If Player is female)

Katherine: *cries* you meanie!

(Regardless, Katherine runs away)

SG1: Great job, you beat her, we won!

SG2: Yeah, except there’s now a huge hole in the wall!

SG1: Uhuh, and don’t forget the fact that we are both crippled! (Happy face)

SG2: Idiot…

(Screen fades to black, as it reopens, the player and the security guards are standing in the room, the wall has now been patched up)

SG1: Wow, it’s a good thing we live in a world where the most crippling and fatal injuries can be cured by band-aids!

SG2: Indeed…

(screen fades out: TUTORIAL COMPLETE)
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Tim Hortans on Fri May 06, 2011 1:20 am

lol'd at the fact that Katherine was killing all the girls.

Otherwise kinda boring.
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Mrsebi on Fri May 06, 2011 1:27 am

fine... hold on...
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Tom Gaskarth on Fri May 06, 2011 1:45 am

Tutorial.

Blank screen

????:*Player Name* It's me Erik, what are you doing? You're gonna be late for V's speech! You know how he is when people are late!

The player awakes in their bed room and takes control walking straight down to exit their room to find Erik in the corridor waiting for them

Erik: Come on! He'll go off on a rant again and make you do some ridiculous task if we're late. Follow me.

The player auto follows Erik to the main hall area which is full of TR members. The camera pans up to see a figure standing on platform.

V: Hello Ladies and Gentlemen it is I your beloved leader Vamparagon I assume you were all here on time?

All: Yes sir

???: *player name* wasn't.

Erik: Oh God it's Sebi.

Sebi: Please mr V *player name* was late sir!

V: That'll do Sebi, here's a treat.

Sebi: Oh thank you sir!

V: So *Player name* you think you can just walk in whenever you please?

Erik: Don't respond *Player name*

V: Well, for your punishment, You shall...ummmm.... you shall.....

Sebi: Slay a dragon!

V: Yes! Slay a dragon!

All: What?!? Is he crazy?

V: SILENCE! *Player name* was late so they will be punished! TR ADJORNED.

Erik: Don't worry I'll help you out.

Erik leads the player out side where a dragon just so happens to be chillin.

Erik: Well that was easy.

Battle animation!!

Erik leads the player through the battle


Erik: Well that wasn't too bad we better take some thing back for his royal craziness.

Scene cuts to V's office

Erik: Here, this is a tooth from the dragon *player name slayed*

V: I'm impressed *Player name* you can have these!

V gives the player a map and a list of things to do

V: As of now you're free to do whatever the hell you want!

TUTORIAL COMPLETE
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Darre on Fri May 06, 2011 1:50 am

I like it. It is perfect for what you wrote but maybe we should continue it so that it tells you other stuff like where stuff is.
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Post by Mrsebi on Fri May 06, 2011 1:50 am

TR- The Game: Tutorial.

(Player wakes up on a beach)

Player: Ugh… where am I?

(player slowly gets up, instructions appear on how to move and interact with objects, and an arrow points to move to the left, eventually the player finds a path with a sign next to it, then collapses on the ground)

Player: Owwww...

(Game fades to black, and then reveals again to show the player in an infirmary, Security Guard 1 and 2 are in the room)

SG1: I think he is waking up!

SG2: Maybe you should poke him with a stick?

SG1: We don’t have sticks, just needles.

SG2: Fine, then poke him with a needle genius!

Player: I’m awake, I’m awake!

SG2: Are you sure? (To SG1) We should poke him just in case!

Player: Please don’t…. (Gets out of bed) where am I?

SG1: Ah yes… *ahem* welcome to TR island!

Player: Where?

SG2: TR Island, home to legendary Vamparagon and his loyal followers!

SG1: Well… loyal as long as he keeps paying us…

Player: I don’t think I have ever heard of this place?

SG1: That would probably be because two years ago one of our members had a bit of a hissy fit and torched the speedboat… (shakes head) Peregrine never recovered…

SG2: We have been isolated here since, at first everyone worked with each other… vaguely well, but things deteriorated pretty quickly.

Player: I see… so I’m in the building?

SG1: A building, at first there was the main complex right here in the middle of the island, as we fell apart though, members split off and built their own housing: now this place is littered with small constructions and underground complexes! You’d think we would build boats but…

SG2: But enough about us, tell us about you: what’s your name, how did you get here?

Player: My name is *name* and I was…

(Suddenly there is a loud explosion)

SG1: We’re under attack!

SG2: All men to battle-stations! Those who flee will die!

Player: Um… there’s just the three of us?

SG1: Don’t be a smart ass… come on!

(Player, Security Guard 1 and 2 go to a different room, there is a hole in the wall and standing in front of it is a mysterious girl and two female shaped robots)

??? Girl: At last! A new place for the female forces to conquer! Squeeeee!

SG1: Not so fast Katherine!

Katherine: Ewwwww… guys! You die now! Fembots, attack!

(The robots hit and wound SG1 and SG2)

SG1&SG2: Owwww…

(If player is male)

Katherine: You go smoosh too!

(if player is female)

Katherine: Oooo… a new girl! Wanna join us?

(Regardless of player gender)

Player: You just killed Security guard one and two!

SG2: How the heck do you even know our names?

SG1: And we isn’t dead!

Player: I will avenge your deaths brave warriors…

( a battle starts: the player is fighting a Fembots, during the battle SG1&SG2 will explain to the player the controls, the player wins and the robots are smashed)

Katherine: Noooooooo, The fembots! Altera worked so hard on those…

Player: You are next!

(If player is male)

Katherine: You jerk! I’m going to flay the flesh off your bones and drink your blood baka!

(If Player is female)

Katherine: *cries* you big meanie!

(Regardless, there is a ringing noise)

Katherine: Hmmm? *answers phone* Lion? I’ll be right there! (to the player) you got lucky…

SG1: Great job, you beat her, we won!

SG2: Yeah, except there’s now a huge hole in the wall!

SG1: Uhuh, and don’t forget the fact that we are both crippled! (Happy face)

SG2: Idiot…

(Screen fades to black, as it reopens, the player and the security guards are standing in the room, the wall has now been patched up)

SG1: Wow, it’s a good thing we live in a world where the most crippling and fatal injuries can be cured by band-aids!

SG2: Indeed…

Player: So what was that all about?

SG2: Well, as we mentioned earlier, the members split off into groups after a while.

SG1: Me, number two here, and Ryzaa, Flawsie, Rage and Shadow stayed with Vamparagon, we are the… original group.

SG2: Most of the girls: Altera, Lion, Katherine and Xusha, they formed a female only group.

SG1: And they all became lesbians!

SG2: Not the good kind… ball-busting man hating lesbians!

Player: I… see?

SG2: You also had the British group; they managed to set things up in the old abandoned castle at the edge of the island; that would be Thoru, Wixmagic, Chamberino, Tim and Tom.

SG1: These are just the main ‘’head members’’ though, all of these groups have a few dozen less important members that really serve no important plot point.

Player: So there are just the three groups?

??? : Not at all…

(A dark haired man in a suit enters)

SG1&SG2: Commander Shadow!

Shadow: (to the guards) Hello my fellow withered roses on the path of eternal damnation.

Player: This is one of you guys?

Shadow: Indeed… I am SHADOW! THE VOID THAT FILLS THE AIR, THE ENTERNAL SADNESS!

SG2: The whiny emo?

Shadow: I AM NOT AN EMO! Tom is…

SG1: (whispers) they both are!

Shadow: Regardless my black souls… (To player) there are other members as well throughout the island… Not all of us wanted to be part of a group; some of them are in hiding; trying to escape the conflict…

SG2: Juliana, Winnie, Aeonarial, Soler Flare, Weena, Kaotic, etc…

Shadow: And some we just don’t want to do anything with, either because they are too dangerous or too unstable, we just don’t like them.

SG1: (To Shadow) you mean like Peregrine or that weird masked guy in the forest south of here?

Shadow: Exactly, my advice is to stay away from that place; these are the people who were not able to hold their mental fortitude when the schism occurred.

Player: Wouldn’t it be simpler to capture them and treat them?

Shadow: It would… but as we said earlier, we don’t like these people.

SG1: Some of them don’t shower!

Shadow: Anyways, I am here to bring our new visitor to the Lord Vamparagon, (to player) please come with me!

Player: Alright…

(Screen fades out: TUTORIAL COMPLETE)
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Darre on Fri May 06, 2011 1:55 am

Nice. I like it. It develops a story line quite nicely too. I only have two issues, clicking through that many lines of dialog might get boring and we should confirm if the girls care about being called ball-busting man hating lesbians.
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Tom Gaskarth on Fri May 06, 2011 1:59 am

Tim's not British you eejit.

REDOING MINE TO GET MORE INFO.


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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Darre on Fri May 06, 2011 2:00 am

Being Canadian is close enough.
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Post by Tim Hortans on Fri May 06, 2011 2:04 am

Lol pretty much. We still bow down to the queen (Why, I will never understand).

Also I missed that part reading it. Which just goes to show how attentive I am.
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Mrsebi on Fri May 06, 2011 2:07 am

Changed:

TR- The Game: Tutorial.

(Player wakes up on a beach)

Player: Ugh… where am I?

(player slowly gets up, instructions appear on how to move and interact with objects, and an arrow points to move to the left, eventually the player finds a path with a sign next to it, then collapses on the ground)

Player: Owwww...

(Game fades to black, and then reveals again to show the player in an infirmary, Security Guard 1 and 2 are in the room)

SG1: I think he is waking up!

SG2: Maybe you should poke him with a stick?

SG1: We don’t have sticks, just needles.

SG2: Fine, then poke him with a needle genius!

Player: I’m awake, I’m awake!

SG2: Are you sure? (To SG1) We should poke him just in case!

Player: Please don’t…. (Gets out of bed) where am I?

SG1: Ah yes… *ahem* welcome to TR island!

Player: Where?

SG2: TR Island, home to legendary Vamparagon and his loyal followers!

SG1: Well… loyal as long as he keeps paying us…

Player: I don’t think I have ever heard of this place?

SG1: That would probably be because two years ago one of our members had a bit of a hissy fit and torched the speedboat… (shakes head) Peregrine never recovered…

SG2: We have been isolated here since, at first everyone worked with each other… vaguely well, but things deteriorated pretty quickly.

Player: I see… so I’m in the building?

SG1: A building, at first there was the main complex right here in the middle of the island, as we fell apart though, members split off and built their own housing: now this place is littered with small constructions and underground complexes! You’d think we would build boats but…

SG2: But enough about us, tell us about you: what’s your name, how did you get here?

Player: My name is *name* and I was…

(Suddenly there is a loud explosion)

SG1: We’re under attack!

SG2: All men to battle-stations! Those who flee will die!

Player: Um… there’s just the three of us?

SG1: Don’t be a smart ass… come on!

(Player, Security Guard 1 and 2 go to a different room, there is a hole in the wall and standing in front of it is a mysterious girl and two female shaped robots)

??? Girl: At last! A new place for the female forces to conquer! Squeeeee!

SG1: Not so fast Katherine!

Katherine: Ewwwww… guys! You die now! Fembots, attack!

(The robots hit and wound SG1 and SG2)

SG1&SG2: Owwww…

(If player is male)

Katherine: You go smoosh too!

(if player is female)

Katherine: Oooo… a new girl! Wanna join us?

(Regardless of player gender)

Player: You just killed Security guard one and two!

SG2: How the heck do you even know our names?

SG1: And we isn’t dead!

Player: I will avenge your deaths brave warriors…

( a battle starts: the player is fighting a Fembots, during the battle SG1&SG2 will explain to the player the controls, the player wins and the robots are smashed)

Katherine: Noooooooo, The fembots! Altera worked so hard on those…

Player: You are next!

(If player is male)

Katherine: You jerk! I’m going to flay the flesh off your bones and drink your blood baka!

(If Player is female)

Katherine: *cries* you big meanie!

(Regardless, there is a ringing noise)

Katherine: Hmmm? *answers phone* Lion? I’ll be right there! (to the player) you got lucky…

SG1: Great job, you beat her, we won!

SG2: Yeah, except there’s now a huge hole in the wall!

SG1: Uhuh, and don’t forget the fact that we are both crippled! (Happy face)

SG2: Idiot…

(Screen fades to black, as it reopens, the player and the security guards are standing in the room, the wall has now been patched up)

SG1: Wow, it’s a good thing we live in a world where the most crippling and fatal injuries can be cured by band-aids!

SG2: Indeed…

Player: So what was that all about?

SG2: Well, as we mentioned earlier, the members split off into groups after a while.

SG1: Me, number two here, and Ryzaa, Flawsie, Rage and Shadow stayed with Vamparagon, we are the… original group.

SG2: Most of the girls: Altera, Lion, Katherine and Xusha, they formed a female only group.

SG1: And they all became lesbians!

SG2: Not the good kind… ball-busting man hating lesbians!

Player: I… see?

SG2: You also had the British group; they managed to set things up in the old abandoned castle at the edge of the island; that would be Thoru, Wixmagic, Chamberino, Tim and Tom.

SG1: They aren’t all British per-se; we just call them that because they all enjoy… tea-time!

(Both guards shudder)

SG1: These are just the main ‘’head members’’ though, all of these groups have a few dozen less important members that really serve no important plot point.

Player: So there are just the three groups?

??? : Not at all…

(A dark haired man in a suit enters)

SG1&SG2: Commander Shadow!

Shadow: (to the guards) Hello my fellow withered roses on the path of eternal damnation.

Player: This is one of you guys?

Shadow: Indeed… I am SHADOW! THE VOID THAT FILLS THE AIR, THE ENTERNAL SADNESS!

SG2: The whiny emo?

Shadow: I AM NOT AN EMO! Tom is…

SG1: (whispers) they both are!

Shadow: Regardless my black souls… (To player) there are other members as well throughout the island… Not all of us wanted to be part of a group; some of them are in hiding; trying to escape the conflict…

SG2: Juliana, Winnie, Aeonarial, Soler Flare, Weena, Kaotic, etc…

Shadow: And some we just don’t want to do anything with, either because they are too dangerous or too unstable, we just don’t like them.

SG1: (To Shadow) you mean like Peregrine or that weird masked guy in the forest south of here?

Shadow: Exactly, my advice is to stay away from that place; these are the people who were not able to hold their mental fortitude when the schism occurred.

Player: Wouldn’t it be simpler to capture them and treat them?

Shadow: It would… but as we said earlier, we don’t like these people.

SG1: Some of them don’t shower!

Shadow: Anyways, I am here to bring our new visitor to the Lord Vamparagon, (to player) please come with me!

Player: Alright…

(Meanwhile, we see Katherine enter a metallic room)

Lion: Katherine, did you attack the other groups again?

Katherine: Of course! All these dirty men must be removed from the island!

Altera: You didn’t have to steal my robots…

Katherine: But… but…

Xusha: You do know that if you keep this up, people will start thinking we are a group of crazy lesbian amazons out to kill all males!

Katherine: Well we should! They are icky!

Altera: Oh, you are in trouble young lady! And were you the one who burned my lemon fics?

Katherine: They had only boys…

Lion: That’s it! You go sit in the corner!

Katherine: Waaaaaaaaaaaah! *runs off crying*

Xusha: *sighs* Maybe we should go sort this out with the other groups?

Altera: Eh… she did have a point; it seems like ever since we got locked on the island, nobody but us has taken a shower!

Lion: That… may be because we have the cleansing facilities?

Xusha: Ah well, I’m sure it doesn’t matter.

(Back at TR Original Group Fortress, Vamparagon, Flaw and Rage are sitting around a desk)

Vamparagon: The lesbian group has gone far enough, we need to kill them!

(Dun Dun DUUUUUUUUN)

(Screen fades out: TUTORIAL COMPLETE)
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Tom Gaskarth on Fri May 06, 2011 2:11 am

Tutorial.

Blank screen

????:*Player Name* It's me Erik, what are you doing? You're gonna be late for V's speech! You know how he is when people are late!

The player awakes in their bed room and takes control walking straight down to exit their room to find Erik in the corridor waiting for them

Erik: Come on! He'll go off on a rant again and make you do some ridiculous task if we're late. Follow me. What? you forgotten how to walk?

Erik explains how to move about

Erik: Now come on!

The player follows Erik to the main hall area which is full of TR members. The camera pans up to see a figure standing on platform.

V: Hello Ladies and Gentlemen it is I your beloved leader Vamparagon I assume you were all here on time?

All: Yes sir

???: *player name* wasn't.

Erik: Oh God it's Sebi.

Sebi: Please mr V *player name* was late sir!

V: That'll do Sebi, here's a treat.

Sebi: Oh thank you sir!

V: So *Player name* you think you can just walk in whenever you please?

Erik: Don't respond *Player name*

V: Well, for your punishment, You shall...ummmm.... you shall.....

Sebi: Slay a dragon!

V: Yes! Slay a dragon!

All: What?!? Is he crazy?

V: SILENCE! *Player name* was late so they will be punished! TR ADJORNED.

Erik: Don't worry I'll help you out.

Erik leads the player out side where a dragon just so happens to be chillin.

Erik: Well that was easy.

Battle animation!!

Erik leads the player through the battle


Erik: Well that wasn't too bad we better take some thing back for his royal craziness. Go on, get a tooth! What? Oh you just do this...

Erik shows the player how to pick up items

Erik: Let's go prove to V that you did it!

Scene cuts to V's office

Erik: *Player name* slayed a dragon! Go on *player name* give him the tooth! You do know how to right? Let me show you...

Erik shows the player how to give items.

V: I'm impressed *Player name* you can have these!

V gives the player a map and a list of things to do

V: As of now you're free to do whatever the hell you want!

TUTORIAL COMPLETE
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Snukems on Fri May 06, 2011 3:11 am

Player walks into TR castle, reading out loud.
Player: HEY I HEARD YOU GUYS ARE ACCEPTING NEW MEMBERS AGAIN.
Player calls *Nuke on Skype.
Player: Hey man can you get someone to let the lifty bridge thing to come down so I can go over it?
Nuke: Yeah but only a PRINCE (Admin) can do that.
Nuke adds Shadow to the call.
Shadow: HOW DID YOU ADD ME I DON'T EVEN HAVE SKYPE?
Nuke: Using the power of lulz.
Shadow: I'm serious.
Nuke: I used your MSN address. I don't know how and I don't think I want to know how.
Shadow: Well then. Since you did the impossible, what is the reason for you calling me on Skype?
Nuke: There are three people in this call. Ganon there is a new recruit. Let him get in, please?
Shadow: Sure.
The bridge is now down.
Player: Thank you Mr. Shadow.
Shadow: k. Anything else, Nuke?
Nuke: Who'll show this guy around TR Castle?
Shadow: You decide. I'm leaving the call.
Nuke: Alright.
Shadow leaves. Nuke adds Rob.
Rob: What is it?
Nuke: Can you show [[Player]] TR Castle? As in a tutorial-ish thing.
Rob: Sure.
Nuke: Go to the front entrance. He'll be there.
Rob: Nothing better to do, I guess.
Player: Ok, Rob!
Rob takes him to the Security Guard Armory
Rob: You're now going to be a TR trooper since Vamp says so.
Player: k.
Player gets TUTORIAL ARMOR and SORD (The worst sword possible.)
Rob: You now have the two worst pieces of equipment in the armory. How does this make you feel?
Player: I'm fine with it.
Rob: Good because you are now going to be thrown into a test battle with Sebi.
Player: WAIT WHAT?
Rob drags the Player to Sebi's room and tells them to do battle.
Tutorial stuff in-battle.
Player, upon beating Sebi, gets a room in TR Castle!

Rob: That was easy, I'd bet.

How's this?
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Tom Gaskarth on Fri May 06, 2011 3:22 am

Y U DO THIS TO ME NUKE MY STORY LOOKS LIKE SEBI'S NOW. TERRIBLE. Y U DO THIS.
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Snukems on Fri May 06, 2011 3:34 am

I lol'd so hard.
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Peregrine on Fri May 06, 2011 4:58 am

Basically, from where we left off, Cial approaches, greets the newcomer and exclaims that he/she fits the prophecy perfectly, and takes him/her to the castle, explaining different functions and people, like Tim, the coffeemaster/armory dealer in the store and takes the newcomer to V, who sends the chosen one on a quest to kill a dragon (he's going mad) and bring back the skin. Cial tells him/her this and Cial offers to kill it himself, showing the basics of the combat system and defeating the dragon. There's a lot more, but parts have been deleted upon my re-reading a while ago.

The scene opens to a generic bright summer day. Player is walking along next to a moat. The moat has a drawbridge that is currently lowered which connects where Player is walking and a castle. Player is stopped by a man (Cial) coming the other way.

Cial: 'sup?
Player: Hey man.
Cial: I don't suppose you're interested in a job?
Player: That depends, what kind of job are we talking about?
Cial: Well, this is kind of embarrassing, but we have this prophecy and...
Player: Oh here we go.
Cial: Hey, let me finish! So we have this prophecy and this chosen one, but we recently lost our chosen one.
Player: You mean he was struck down by the forces of evil?
Cial: Didn't I just get done saying he was the chosen one? Why would the chosen one be struck down by the forces of evil?
Player: I just thought...
Cial: You just ASSUMED man. Anyway, so our chosen one was struck down by the forces of evil and we need a new one.
Player: Doesn't the chosen one have to be, I don't know, chosen?
Cial: You are being chosen. By me.
Player: I think I'm starting to see why the last one died.
Cial: At least let me take you to king Vamparagon. The job comes with great dental.
Player: Unless you're going to match my 401k don't even waste my time.
Cial: Hey now, tell it to the boss. Let's go see him now. Follow me.

The screen cuts to a stylish instructional panel explaining how to move around the world. Controls are frozen while Cial walks across the moat and vanishes into the castle. Controls are resumed. The player can now also cross the moat and enter the castle. It might be cool to have an entire scene be the moat here but whatever that's not my job. The castle is a square that you can walk the perimeter of, but Security Officer #1 blocks access to the right side of the castle, funneling the player into the left side.

(if he is spoken to)
Security Officer #1: Sorry, can't let you pass. There's obligatory construction being done right now, which may or may not have anything to do with there being an ancient shrine filled with artifacts that you need to access in order to defeat the necromancer before the princess's essence is drained and the world is destroyed. Order of the king and all that.

The player walks up the left side of the castle. On the vertical stretch, there is a coffee shop labeled TIM HORTANS carved into the wall, complete with a snazzy counter, shopkeeper and some seating.

(if he is spoken to)
Tim Hortans: Welcome to Tim Hortan's. I'm Tim, and I run this here coffee shop.
Player: Oh wow, you guys have a Tim Hortons INSIDE the castle?
Tim Hortans: Nah, this is Tim Hortans. Not Tim Hortons.
Player: So basically your coffee sucks and you're using established brand names to sell it.
Tim Hortans: Hey now, my hot beverages are just as good as real coffee.
Player: So it sucks so bad you don't even call it coffee.
Tim Hortans: Are you going to buy something or not?
Player: Fine. I'll have a... hot beverage.
Tim Hortans: Huh. Looks like you don't have any money.
Player: Can't I have a hot beverage anyway if I'm getting a job here?
Tim Hortans: If you want I could shout "YOU GET HOT BEVERAGE" as loudly as possible.
Player: Fine, we'll do that.
Tim Hortans: YOU GET HOT BEVERAGE!!!!!!!1!!!!1

The player continues and finds another shop carved into the wall, this time a forge called THE ADOMANTINE REIGN. A smith is present doing some smithing or something.

(if he is spoken to)
Tim Hortans: Welcome to The Adomantine Reign, I'm Tim and I run this here forge.
Player: Wait... Weren't you just over there? How did you get up here so quickly?
Tim Hortans: You were just over there too. How did YOU get here so quickly?
Player: ...Right, so do you really sell adamantine gear?
Tim Hortans: Nah, I just sell a synthetic knockoff called adomantine.
Player: I hate you.
Tim Hortans: Hey now, it's just as good as the real thing.
Player: I bet all you did was take some iron gear and repaint it.
Tim Hortans: SHUT UP YOU'RE GOING TO PUT ME OUT OF BUSINESS.
Player: So can I see what... blue iron gear you sell?
Tim Hortans: Yeah sure. Look around all you want.

The screen cuts to a stylish instructional panel explaining currency, shops and how to access inventory.

Cue SHOP INTERFACE.
Buy:
Blue Iron Armor
Blue Iron Weapons
Blue Iron Ammo
Blue Iron Misc Items

Sell:
You don't own anything.


Tim Hortans: See you later.

The player continues. The next scene is the same as the first one, but this time the door is on the opposite side of the hallway. Security Officer #2 blocks the way right.

(if he is spoken to)
Security Officer #2: Hey, thanks for dropping by. Most people just talk to the first guy blocking the path and assume the second says the same thing. Sometimes it gets really lonely, guarding the right side of the castle.

The player enters the throne room. Cial is there, as is Vamparagon in a golden throne.

Cial: Hey boss.
Player: Hey, I'm here to discuss possibly getting a job as the chosen one.
Vamparagon: IF YOU WANT TO BE THE CHOSEN ONE-
Player: Actually I just wanted to get some detail-
Vamparagon: -YOU MUST FIRST SLAY THE MGIHTY DRAGON THAT LIVES IN THE CAVE TO THE EAST. I need its hide to make a stylish rug.
Player: -but I don't even-
Vamparagon: Cial, take this man to the dragon's lair.
Cial: Right away.

Cial's sprite pushes Player's sprite out of the throne room in a really awkward manner.

Player: AT LEAST TELL ME IF WHAT I HEARD ABOUT GREAT DENTAL WAS TRUE.
Vamparagon: It's funny you heard that, because working here...
Dramatic pause.
Vamparagon: HAS NO DENTAL.
Player: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

Scene changes to the outside of a dragon's lair.

Cial: Alright, it's time to teach you how to fight. Here, take this adonontine weapon and armour from the forge.

You get adomontine weapon and armour from the forge!
You equip adomontine weapon and armour from the forge.

A baby dragon exists the cave and Cial fights it. The screen fades every time something new is shown and explains it. Spells, fighting, health, etc are all included. Eventually, Cial slays the dragon.

Cial: That wasn't too hard.

A fully grown dragon exits the cave and tosses Cial against a tree for killing its offspring.

Cial: Ow.

Boss fight: THE MIGHTY DRAGON. Since this is a tutorial the mighty dragon is more like the crappiest dragon ever that even worms could defeat later on, but hey whatever. It's a tutorial. It's supposed to be easy. The dragon drops X currency and its hide.

Cial: Good job with that dragon.
Player: Convenient that you wake up immediately after the dragon was killed.
Cial: At least we got the hide.
Player: Yeah, we didn't even have to butcher it.
Cial: Well the way you were hacking wildly at it I'm not surprised all of its skin fell off.
Player: So you confess to being conscious the whole fight.
Cial: Let's just go see Vamparagon.

*later, back in the throne room.*

Vamparagon: Holy crap, you actually killed the dragon. I guess you are the chosen one.
Cial: I do know how to pick 'em, don't I?
Player: Wait, was that the test?
Vamparagon: Well no, it wasn't actually the test, but you're doing better than the last chosen one.
Cial: Last one was a drunk from a bar.
Player: I'm not sure you guys really understand how this works.
Vamparagon: What we do and don't understand aside. Cial, show our new chosen one their new rooms.
Player: But I didn't even accept the job.
Cial: You're the chosen one. Destiny accepted for you.
Vamparagon: Destiny also set your wage to be zero.
Player: What a jerk.
Destiny: : (


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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Tim Hortans on Fri May 06, 2011 5:06 am

I nominate pere for everything.

"Security Officer #2: Hey, thanks for dropping by. Most people just talk to the first guy blocking the path and assume the second says the same thing. Sometimes it gets really lonely, guarding the left side of the castle."

THAT is the kind of humor I want from games.
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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Peregrine on Fri May 06, 2011 5:18 am

Oh that should actually be right side of the castle. Whoops.

But thanks.

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Re: Mission One - The Tutorial

Post by Cial on Fri May 06, 2011 5:21 am

Pere<3

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I still say Cial is just one of those NPC's that has something witty to say when on certain quests, mostly staying in one spot after his dragon incident. And "HOT BEVERAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!11!!!" should be the game's meme.
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